First off: I find this blog a little confusing and overwhelming. I hate to be negative but I am confused as there seem to be more than one topic being discussed on this blog? I found it to be a little overwhelming as there is just so much information, I worry over whether you are over the word limit? you might not be, I didn't count :) Your visual language is spot on for the topics they are supposed to support, but again, there is a varied amount of topics. Your grammar seems to be fine, though I will confess to not have reading your entire blog. Hope some of this could help in some way?
First off: I find this blog a little confusing and overwhelming. I hate to be negative but I am confused as there seem to be more than one topic being discussed on this blog?
ReplyDeleteI found it to be a little overwhelming as there is just so much information, I worry over whether you are over the word limit? you might not be, I didn't count :)
Your visual language is spot on for the topics they are supposed to support, but again, there is a varied amount of topics.
Your grammar seems to be fine, though I will confess to not have reading your entire blog.
Hope some of this could help in some way?